Working on my maths goal

(:This is a math game and it is hard to beat your teacher but I beet my teacher:)  

My Reading Goal

Working on my writing

I have been trying to finish my goal but I need to keep working on it. In this story I added two details. In my next story I want to add more. I could add details about how I made my gold mine, what I had for dinner, who Mason and Isla are and I how I felt about my holiday and what I was doing. 

Mrs o and I read through my story and we saw that I was putting in lots of onomatopoeias and that I started my story with a onomatopoeia. 

Working on my writing goal

Today I have started to write10 sentences and it's going great. I am concentrating and trying to ignore others and get on with my work. My story is about Nana and Grandads house. When its finished I will share it on my blog. I am proud of my story.