Working on my writing

I have been trying to finish my goal but I need to keep working on it. In this story I added two details. In my next story I want to add more. I could add details about how I made my gold mine, what I had for dinner, who Mason and Isla are and I how I felt about my holiday and what I was doing. 

Mrs o and I read through my story and we saw that I was putting in lots of onomatopoeias and that I started my story with a onomatopoeia. 

Working on my writing goal

Today I have started to write10 sentences and it's going great. I am concentrating and trying to ignore others and get on with my work. My story is about Nana and Grandads house. When its finished I will share it on my blog. I am proud of my story. 

Working on my writing goal

Today I am going to write 10 sentences. I am going to add details and capitals letters. To check my capital letters I am going to look at the anchor chart. 

My Writing Goal