Wednesday, 7 May 2014

Working on my writing

I have been trying to finish my goal but I need to keep working on it. In this story I added two details. In my next story I want to add more. I could add details about how I made my gold mine, what I had for dinner, who Mason and Isla are and I how I felt about my holiday and what I was doing. 
Mrs o and I read through my story and we saw that I was putting in lots of onomatopoeias and that I started my story with a onomatopoeia. 

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  1. Anonymous12 May 2014 at 15:01

    Hi Luca
    I play minecraft on my ipod too.What is your favorite onomatopoeia?

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