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My new motorbike is a jr80. Its top speed is about 70? or 80? when I was riding I crashed and the motorbike falled on my foot. It did not hu...
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Hi my name is Luca and this is my carnival craft me and Aidan are doing this he will post a thing about this to have a look at this video o...
Hi Luca
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely clear voice you have. I really like your illustrations. I enjoyed your story too. What a clever idea! What is your next piece of writing about?
Luca, I am hugely impressed with your story telling ability. You've used a really clear voice and it's a refreshing change for me to listen to a story that is told rather than being read. I am also thrilled with the language you have used - confused, respond, meanwhile, myth, rustling, pulsing.
ReplyDeleteJust one wee reminder - the past tense of the word 'write' is wrote, not writ.
Thanks so much for sharing.